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Sunday, March 17, 2013

70'S Whitesploitaion Buddy Cop Treatment

70's Blaxtiploitation and 80'S Buddy-Cop Movie (w/cliches) "Frantic Cutting”
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Its blaxploitation, but he is white and it's a buddy cop.


A cop, dressed in an open collared shirt and a leather jacket, WHITE THUNDER™ and his partner JET HURRICANE™, arrive at a “toy factory”. They are in pursuit of the asian crime syndicate lead by mob boss Hung Lo, who has been poisoning kids with lead paint action figures since ‘62. Thunder notices boxes being moved and Thunder stops. They exit the car. Thunder tells Jet that he can take on Hung Lo alone. Jet says he can try, he takes out two and loses to Dragon Wang Chan he dies because he is inferior. Thunder tries to open the door, but he can’t, he notices the shots but is too late. Thunder takes the badge and cut to next scene.

4 years later, and White Thunder’s loose cannon actions have resulted in the distribution of bootleg toys and that causes hundreds of kids to get hurt/sick. Black police chief Dreyfus calls Thunder into his office. He tells Thunder that he's a loose canon. He needs someone to keep him in line. Dreyfus tells Thunder that his new partner will be Panama Jack/Joe, an equally ego-centric detective. Dreyfus  explains that Panama is a straight cop that grew up in the ghetto and vowed to take crime off the streets. Thunder resists, however, and says that he only "flies solo". Chief Dreyfus says the partner is not optional. Either that, or Thunder loses his badge. Chief Dreyfus softens up a little and says that he knows Thunder still takes blame for his partner's death. This case has links to the unsolved murder. He calls Panama into the room. His feet can only be seen. The door knob twists, and as he walks in, he gets one look at Thunder and goes "heyll nah!" He explains to Thunder that he is as resistant as Thunder and he doesn't want to be partners either.

White Thunder and Panama stroll out of the office. Standing around the water dispenser is two other cops, Thunder’s rivals, Darrel Roebuck Marvin Searzinski, taunt the pair about their new partnership, with gay undertones. Thunder and Panama feel like separate entities.
In the car they talk. [CHARACTERIZATION]

Thunder barges in to the Hispanic informant’s house, who usually gives Thunder information in turn for letting him slide a little. Panama slyly just walks in. Thunder questions him, but he won't give in this time. Thunder going around the house and knock things over, sarcastically telling him things like “this looks like an expensive vase. To bad its broken.” Panama starts to disagree with Thunder on his ethics and tries to take the lead. Eventually the Nicaraguan guy caves when panama speak spanish and tells him where Hung Lo’s hideout is.
We cut to the lair of Hung Lo, Pier 69, Hung Lo briefs Dragon Wang Chan. He tells Chan that he must eliminate Thunder like he did to Jet Hurricane, he says Dragon Wang is his most loyal servant and trusts him to take care of White Thunder who has been on his case ever since.

While on the stakeout, they talk about Hung Lo. After they see crime they decide to sneak in.
They get to the hideout and Thunder wants to stick together. Unfortunately are caught after they fail in a kung fu fight. At shotgun point they are confronted by Wong and his henchmen. Thunder gets a "Thunder Sense" and looks at two of the henchmen. After a small looky loo, Thunder notices something isn't right. Suddenly, the two odd henchmen punch out the other henchmen, and Wong runs. It turns out that the 2 "henchmen" were actually agents undercover. They had to blow their cover to save Thunder and Panama, They are angry because they had been working on the case for 8 months infiltrating Hung Lo’s ranks.

Chief Dreyfus calls them into his office. He is furious and scolds them and calls them "irresponsible" and takes their badges and guns. Thunder suggests that he ask first to take them off the case. Panama says that the situation is "hella wack." Disgruntled but hopeful, they separate for a while.

One day Thunder gets a phone call: Dreyfhus has been shot. He calls Panama and they put aside their differences and decide to track down Hung Lo. They track Hung Lo to his new lair and try to arrest him, at which point Thunder's love interest, Destiny Jones, comes forth as a hostage of Wong's. As Dragon and Thunder are about to fight to the death and there is a flashback with Thunder running through the jungle and hears a man yelling in agony. Thunder runs toward the man and notices he is part of the Vietcong and in attempt to shoot him Thunder couldn’t kill wounded man so he rips a piece of his jacket/shirt and wraps it around Dragon’s eye. The final confrontation ends with Wong dying. The two have become friends, and they finally accept each other. Thunder gets the girl, and Panama goes on to become the police chief with the lowest crime rate in a century.

Tuesday, May 15, 2012

70's BLaxtiploitation and 80'S Buddy-Cop Movie (w/cliches)

70's BLaxtiploitation and 80'S Buddy-Cop Movie (w/cliches)
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White Thunder is a Detriot city cop that don't take no for an answer. With his caucasian jive accent, afro, Ford Mustang, and black belt in Gung-Fu, he patrols the streets taking out "punk-ass bitches."


Unfortunately, during a routine drug bust, 3 civilians were injured due to Thunders ego.

Black police chief Dreyfhus calls Thunder into his office. He tells Thunder that he's a loose canon. He needs someone to keep him in line. Dreyfhus tells Thunder that his new partner will be Panama Jack/Joe, an equally ego-centric detective. Dreyfus  explains that Panama is a straight cop that grew up in the ghetto and vowed to take crime off the streets. Thunder resists, however, and says that he only "flies solo". Chief Dreyfus says the partner is not optional.  Either that, or Thunder loses his badge. He calls Panama into the room. As he walks in, he gets one look at Thunder and goes "heyll nah!" He explains to Thunder that he is as resistant as Thunder and he doesn't want to be there either.

White Thunder and Panama get debriefed on their mission: they must locate Mob boss Hai Wong and take him into custody.  Dreyfus suggests they check out a recent murder that has just been called in. They investigate and find evidence.

Using this evidence, they track one of Hai Wongs Henchmen back to a place. A chase/ fight ensues, and they make their way onto the road.  

After a brief car chase,  They chase him into a gas station, where he throws ninja stars at them, they duck and he refills his gas. Thunder and Panama get to him, and he is forced to abandon his car. They confront him at gunpoint, revealing the location of Hai Wong. Thunder flashbacks to the days in "'Nam".

They get to the hideout, but are caught. At fistpoint they are confronted by Wong and his henchmen. Suddenly, two of the henchmen punch out the other henchmen, and Wong runs. It turns out that the 2 "henchmen" were actually agents undercover. They had to blow their cover to save Thunder and Panama, They are angry because they had been working on the case for 8 months infiltrating Hai Wong's ranks.

Chief Dreyfus calls them into his office. He scolds them and calls them "irresponsible" and takes their badges and guns. Panama says that the situation is "hella wack." Disgruntled but hopeful, they separate for a while, but come together to continue working on the case.

They track Hai Wong to his place and try to arrest him, at which point Thunder's love interest, Destiny Jones, comes forth as a hostage of Wong's and the final confrontation ends with Wong dying. The two have become friends, and they finally accept each other. Thunder gets the girl, and Panama goes on to become the police chief with the lowest crime rate in a century.

Thursday, February 23, 2012

PARALLEL
Predestination paradox
A short film treatment
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Summary for Understanding
A boy chooses to do something. But then someone dies. He tries to go back in time and change it. But then he contributes to the actual death. The he must go back in time once again to stop himself from even contributing to the future. In the end he returns to the beginning.


A man is shifting in and out of conscienceless he sees a watch... He cant believe what he sees
The same man is sitting on the ground in his garage. His friends are around him asking Jim, that is his name, if he was ok. They said that they only wanted to play around but they didn't mean for him to fall.

Jim Buscher lives a simple life. It is the near future and the “Time Age” is dawning. College graduates are making portable low power time machine-devices in their garages. The US government has already started making some, but they are large and unwieldy and have been restricted and classified until about 4 years prior. Parts for their time machine are abundant, such as the Krasnikov tube and the Tipler cylinder, along with new advances such as the Dyson Sphere Emulator. The late Steven Hawking agrees that with these innovations, time travel is not only feasible, can be even proven on a large scale.

In his garage, Jim had created a portable time machine with his two exceptional nerd friends, Thomas and Ridley. They are so excited, that they device to test it out, not thinking that it may be fatal. Excited, they decide that Thomas should go in. When he does, he return in a dying state and looking older, almost instantly. He says that he tried to transport himself to the time before they invented it, but he miscalculated and ended up right after he left. He is also missing his Time Watch. Jim and Ridley are in shock. They don't know what to do. They have to shut the temporal portal to the past, the only way is return to the place where Thomas entered and stop him from ever opening it. If they try to call for help, the portal might open further and suck in the entire house. Eventually they argue over what they should do, but then they are both sucked in and sent into the temporal portal.

They they awake on a beach. A distant noise can be heard, but they pay no attention to it. In the distance, they can see a slight shine: The Watch.

They begin to fight over the watch.

During the fight, Thomas is mortally wounded and falls into the portal. Ridley and Jim realize what they have done.
In shock, they cant believe what has just happened. They decide that they must go back and stop them from ever creating the time machine.

Everything begins to reverse, and, after a series of cool fx shots, Jim is confronted with a test, give himself up for his friend or save himself. He ponders on his situation.

Finally, Jim decides. He throws the Time Watch into the portal as it closes, and he is thrown back and knocked out.

He awakes on the floor. His friends are crowding around him. We didn't mean to hurt you Jim. We were only playing a joke. We didn't mean for you to fall. It is then he realizes: He looks into his hand, and he sees the time watch still in his grasp.

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Short Film Treatment: Parallel



PARALLEL
Predestination paradox
A short film treatment

A boy chooses to do something. But then someone dies. He tries to go back in time and change it. But then he contributes to the actual death. The he must go back in time once again to stop himself from even contributing to the future

A man is shifting in and out of conscienceless he sees a watch... He cant believe what he sees
The same man is sitting on the ground in his garage. His friends are around him asking Jim, that is his name, if he was ok. They said that they only wanted to play around but they didn't mean for him to fall.

Jim Buscher lives a simple life. It is the near future and the “Time Age” is dawning. College graduates are making portable low power time machine-devices in their garages. The US government has already started making some, but they are large and unwieldy and have been restricted and classified until about 4 years prior. Parts for their time machine are abundant, such as the Krasnikov tube and the Tipler cylinder, along with new advances such as the Dyson Sphere Emulator. Carl Sagan and  the late Steven Hawking agree that with these innovations, time travel is not only feasible, can be even proven on a large scale.

In his garage, Jim creates a portable time machine with his two exceptional nerd friends, Thomas and Ridley. They are so excited, that they device to test it out, not thinking that it may be fatal. Excited, they decide that Thomas should go in. When he does, he return in a dying state and looking older, almost instantly. He says that he tried to transport himself to the time before they invented it, but he miscalculated and ended up right after he left. He is also missing his Time Watch. Jim and Ridley are in shock. They don't know what to do. They have to shut the temporal portal to the past, the only way is return to the place where Thomas entered and stop him from ever opening it. If they try to call for help, the portal might open further and suck in the entire house. Eventually they argue over what they should do, but then they are both sucked in and sent into the temporal portal.

They they awake on a beach. A distant noise can be heard, but they pay no attention to it. In the distance, they can see a slight shine: The Watch.

They begin to fight over the watch.

During the fight, Thomas is mortally wounded and falls into the portal. Ridley and Jim realize what they have done.
In shock, they cant believe what has just happened. They decide that they must go back and stop them from ever creating the time machine.
Ridely goes to the present, while Jim goes to the past.
Everything begins to reverse, and after a series of cool fx shots, Jim is confronted with a test, give himself up for his friend or save himself. He ponders on his situation.

Finally, Jim decides. He throws the Time Watch into the portal as it closes, and he is thrown back and knocked out.

He awakes on the floor. His friends are crowding around him. We didn't mean to hurt you Jim. We were only playing a joke. We didn't mean for you to fall. It is then he realizes: He looks into his hand, and he sees the time watch still in his grasp.